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One by one, of a single pair of two
I bathe them in the salt-soap ocean.
'Neath sweaty, noodle arms I scoop
him up and fling his sobbing carcass with one motion
into the whitest, most unforgiving wave.
When he does not return, I scour the beach for her.
She sees me coming – I am not going to cave.
Not as slippery, she fades into abyss without a stir.
and so I sit with folded knees on the beach
wondering if I'll ever have my own to teach.
PMO
12 May 2012
I bathe them in the salt-soap ocean.
'Neath sweaty, noodle arms I scoop
him up and fling his sobbing carcass with one motion
into the whitest, most unforgiving wave.
When he does not return, I scour the beach for her.
She sees me coming – I am not going to cave.
Not as slippery, she fades into abyss without a stir.
and so I sit with folded knees on the beach
wondering if I'll ever have my own to teach.
PMO
12 May 2012
SO...this isn't really about what it might at first seem. I wanted to be intentionally abstract about common experiences and expectations - big "read between the lines" caution tape hehe.
Also - attempt at shakeshonnet (abab, cdcd, efef, gg).
Also - attempt at shakeshonnet (abab, cdcd, efef, gg).
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